University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad overweighs the disadvantages?

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Education
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is an inevitable factor in our life. Nowadays university
students
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are increasingly studying foreign
countries
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as part of their
studies
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This
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essay analyses the advantage and
disadvantage
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of overseas
education
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. On the one hand, the main positive side of study in abroad is that
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the
students
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get quality
education
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compare
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to their native nation,
as well as
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, other
countries
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provide good job opportunities to the
students
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after their
studies
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thus
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it
help
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them to mould a good future.
Furthermore
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, the counties provide good facilities for the
students
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, those who
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migrate to
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developed
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they
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give
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free medical treatment
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the
students
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, the developed
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have
good
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infrastructure
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create
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good
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living
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for the
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graduate
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, in the field of
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education
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they provide modern technologies, it
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to
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students
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to learn subjects very easily.
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, the
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of moving
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to
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abroad is that
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the brain drain
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in their
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. To explain it
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, after their
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studies
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they stay
that
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in that
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country and use their ideas and techniques for other
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countries
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countries'
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development.
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, the UK president is an Indian after his graduation he stayed there and now serve
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other nation, he is a good leader and his ideas
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very valuable.
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to say
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, the number of skilled and qualitative workers
are reduce
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are reduced
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in our country.
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,
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migration
reduce
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the population and the country
donot
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do not
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have the youth to work for our nation.
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,
although
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there are some
drawback
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for
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the
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overseas
education
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after
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university
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, the advantage is overweight the disadvantage. The
students
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can mould
good
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a good
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future.
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