The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.

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graph

presented it is comparing

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energy

production

from 1995 to 2005. the two pie charts represent the

percentage

of material that it is being used on. the

graph

analyzes a

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difference in

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.

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of

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both gas and coal. The

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shows how neither gas

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coal

energy

production

percentage

saw a higher

increase

than 2%, showing

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consistency through 10 years. Meanwhile, Petro´s

percentage

dropped down significantly, almost marking a 10% difference from 1985 to 2005.

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, the

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shows how that 10% was made up, as it can be noticed that

percentage

increase

of both nuclear and other.

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,

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nuclear and other had very similar trends.

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percentage

went up by almost 4%,

while

other

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saw an increment of slightly more than 4%. Both saw an

increase

during the 10 years. In conclusion, it can be noticed in the

graph

the

increase

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yout

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materials,

this

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of the 10% drop

of

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Petro. The most significant

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that it was other but was not as big

due to

the consistency of most materials.