You wanted to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend Tell him/her about your business Explain why you think it is a good idea Ask him/her help for some help or advice

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Dear Mukesh, I'

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writing

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letter to you to tell you about the

business

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that I want to start in the near future in my city. The

business

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going to start is about selling garments for children and adults for both genders. I found

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business

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lucrative and very interesting

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the low risk of loss and higher profit margins. I want to import different styles of clothes from low ranges to high ranges from India to attract all types of customers to visit my store that will be opened soon. As you know, thousands of people migrate to Canada every year from various regions of India.

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will help me to serve all of them and make my dream true.

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, I'

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going to need your help to find me some reputed suppliers from your known area. Currently, I'

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having difficulty finding suppliers who have established their

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in your province because they want me to visit and make a deal in person.

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, communication is

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an issue because they speak Telugu only. As far as I know, you have credible references in your state and

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will help me to make my

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successful. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Gaurav

gauravkalathiya123Fri Apr 28 2023

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Ensure to provide more details on how you plan to attract customers and specify the type of garments you will be selling.

coherence and cohesion

The overall structure of the letter is good. Make sure to use transitions to connect ideas more effectively.

task achievement

Clear explanation of the business idea and the reason for choosing it.

coherence and cohesion

Appropriate greeting and closing in the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

212 words

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