Prisoners should be sent to prisons for crimes committee. What's your opinion

There is a statement that people who conducted

crimes

should go to

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prison

for

crimes

committee

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. There are some pros and cons.

However

, to reduce crime rates and to make a safe country, I think I agree with that statement. I will tell you

pros

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and cons

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them.

To begin

with, I can tell you some

advatages

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advantages

advantage

on that

prisoners

should

go

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to

prisons

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prison

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.

Firstly

, if every

crimes

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crime

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deals with serious

crimes

and

crimers

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crimes

should be sent to

prisions

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prisons

prison

,

peolple's

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people's

activities will be more careful rather than before. They conduct some motions more safely and try to

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with each other

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in order not to make

complicts

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complaints

.

For example

,

prisoners

who were in

prisons

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try

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to write letters

which

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invole

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involve

involved

contents

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that they will not do bad things again and let them go out

from

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prisons

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.

Finally

, these mean that

prisons

are

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method that people do not act

crimes

.

On the other hand

, if every

crimers

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crimes

crime

goes to

prisions

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prisons

prison

, there will be some problems.

Firstly

,

tax

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will be increased. It will make

nations'

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burden. To operate

prisons

, lots of taxes will be needed.

In addition

, people will be introverted because they do not want to go to

prisons

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.

For instance

, in Korea, the number of women's

prison

are

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in shortage, and what's more, one of

women's

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the women's

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prison

is too small to live lots of

prisoners

together. So,

prisoners

in there fought each other to

occupied

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more private spaces. For these problems, it is not simple problems to make

prisoners

to

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be sent to

prisions

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prisons

prison

. In conclusion, there are many pros and cons

on

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sending

prisoners

to

prisons

. But, in spite of

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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, I strongly state that

prisoners

should be sent to

prison

because

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to decrease crime rates and to make

as

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safe country.