Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is rather often that businesses have to endure
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cut-throat competition
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customers and
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sales
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as well. In order for their
products
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to either stand out from the crowd or to
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how unique their
products
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are, companies usually use advertising as a tool
attracting
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customers. In my opinion, marketing and branding strategy for boosting
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by means of advertising new and unique
features
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of a
product
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is
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negative development. Most of the brands if not all claim their
product
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to be the most fascinating which suits
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the customers’ needs with new
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in the market. They do so to create a positive impression
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the consumers to increase their
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and profitability
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also
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staying ahead of their competitors.
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, the advertisements on TV for
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like shampoo, soaps or body lotion proclaim their
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the best ingredients and,
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to that, consist of something new that their counterparts lack
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. They may even outdo their old
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by adding new flavour or a new vitamin claiming that their new
product
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is the best ever. Obviously,
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is a marketing strategy boosting
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and profitability creating a craving between the consumers for their
products
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at the same time. As the new
features
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which the businesses advertise are nothing novel, it is mostly a negative trend doing so. They are merely a different version of the same
product
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with a change of flavour or ingredients. Some
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car manufacturers and electronic device manufacturers sometimes indeed do extensive research revamping their
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and genuinely
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new
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for their customers.
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, most of the time, consumer
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or perhaps some of the well-known electronic brands enjoy adding more creativity to their advertisements rather than the real
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hence
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making the wrong impression on people that they need these new
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To conclude
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, it is through research and development that novelty and innovation of
products
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should be produced and not through tricks of marketing and advertising.
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