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Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

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Nowadays, most parents prefer their students to study outside the
country
as a result
 of which they send them abroad for
further
 academic qualification.
This
 essay will sum up the pros and cons of sending their children abroad.
To begin
 with, the main advantage of it is the number of universities is more in abroad like the USA, Cannada and other foreign countries in comparison to the countries like Nepal and India.
In addition
, there are high opportunities for placement and better job security after completion of the course. So, parents are highly interested and attracted by the facilities
of
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abroad.
For instance
, An article was published in Daily Times which states that MBBS rather prefer to apply for USMLE for postgraduate and settle in
USA
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the USA
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 rather than applying in government hospitals of their own native.
In contrast
,the crucial disadvantage of sending abroad to study can result in a scarcity of qualified manpower in own
country
.It has been observed that thousands of doctors, nurses, engineers
as well as
 persons belonging to several fields are applying overseas after their graduation for
further
 studies with an expectation to be highly paid.
This
 might result in a crisis in future meanwhile it will decrease the number of youth in future. In ,Nepal
according to
 the census of the
last
 ,
decade
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 the number of adults is very low than
the
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old age
due to
 immigration for academic studies.
To conclude
, there are both advantages and disadvantages to allowing children to study outside of the
country
. The advantage can be better education and job opportunities
where
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a the
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a
the
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 prominent disadvantage can be a lack of manpower in the native
country
.
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