Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience.

Many individuals are of the opinion that public servants ought not to be active in service as they reach retirement years. I strongly concur with

this

option that, the elderly who are on the verge of completing their period of work shouldn't be encouraged to go ahead working.

This

is because the older they get the less productive they become and

also

vulnerable to occupational hazards.

To begin

with, I'm of the opinion that, and strongly believe, individuals clocking towards official leaving of civil service should not be permitted to go ahead working.

Although

, still as civil servants, it is detrimental both as a person and organization in terms of productivity and task achievement. Whenever age comes upon a person, his special senses of touch, taste, hearing and vision no longer remain

sharp

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as they were they dwindled,

strength

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and strength

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also

diminishes. Thereby rendering them susceptible to injury.

Also

, Where I

workedfor

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worked for

a decade and a half, there was

this

excellent official driver to our head of department. In all his years, never had a history of road traffic accidents.

However

, as he

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the time of retirement, he had three cases of accidents which he could have avoided. The poor driver made

this

statement and I quote " I didn't see the saloon car coming, all I did hear was a little sound of horn-like". The professional driver couldn't see clearly, or hear well now as compared to

then

.

In addition

,

as a result

of their strength reduction, so

also

shall their input in job allocation which would in turn affect the out considerably and whenever, there's reduced input, the resultant output would be affected and job satisfaction is defeated. The organization will suffer.

Furthermore

, A neighbour of mine, a machine operator at a floor mill company lost his left arm because he was unable to control a loose lever. In conclusion, government and organizations should not allow people to perform organisational tasks as they march forward to their retirement.

Nevertheless

,

this

is because of the negative effects which be inflicted on them as individuals

as well as

a system because they lack the necessary strength, will and skills

as a result

of their bodies undergoing degenerative changes, which prone them to avoidable occupational injuries and dimishined job satisfaction and output