"Different types of environment pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions would you suggest?"

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Nowadays, the most global
problem
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is
enviromental
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environmental
pollution. Some individuals argue that
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environmental
pollution can
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lead
at
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the fact that we faced with terrible
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in the future.
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essay
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I will tell about
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the causes
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and solution of
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problem
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.
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with, our environment
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to be clear for
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people
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health. If our
world
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would be bad for
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, it can
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a role that we can’t live
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Earth.
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cause is that
people
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are destroy
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our nature
yourself
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themselves
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.
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, in the park we can
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with a lot of rubbish, it is very terrible
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our environment, living,
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and being
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?.
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cause is most of all our
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out
a
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gas and coal.
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, every family have
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two or more cars. It can give a big
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the future
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as
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our air.
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. Of
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huge
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, we have many solutions.
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,
people
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a
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care to
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world
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,
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a group to improve our ecology.
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,
government
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needs to include
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law that provides information
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that
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each
of
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family can buy only one car.
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, one good solution would be to use
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electrical
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car,
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as Tesla, because it’s eco-friendly.
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, we can see that
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this solutions
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can influence our
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,
thus
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generation will
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stay
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at
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a
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clever
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environment.
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, if we will continue to save our
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, it can give
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good
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to
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our
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next generation. Ultimately, in the future amount of
people
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can
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increase and we need to be safe.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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