Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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always has been an issue for many people
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should endure
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is one of the most important stages of scientific
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monkeys are the closest creatures to
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body. In order to protect species from extinction or even from
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like diseases, it is essential to conduct some specific
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on specific species.
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to protect millions of them.
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rather than human
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as previously stated are the closest species to humans. The lifecycle of plants is far from ,
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advanced machines or robots that may replace
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may seem an aggressive act to many people,
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its necessity is highly required to protect human"s being
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. For the moment no alternative is found.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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