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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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At the beginning of the coronavirus, employees are working and
students
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 are studying from home because technology has become more affordable and available for everyone.
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 is a positive step forward for individuals and foundations, in my opinion. Many
students
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 who manage their
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 and are curious about lessons are learning new subjects and exploring new hobbies that they never try in their lives. Workers are among those who improve themselves and manage their
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 more effectively
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 of working from home. First of all, almost many
students
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 benefit from that because it is so simple way to learn something and clears some problems of them. These aspects demonstrate it become more comfortable for
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 because of technological developments. Young people can easily use online meeting applications and the internet's millions of resources for lessons.
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, it is not only about improving access to their subject but
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 solving other difficulties of not studying from a house.
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, a big proportion of children paid money for transport to school and eat lunch in school but they gained
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 and cash.
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, businesses discovered new methods for increasing employee effectiveness and dealing with more creative shifts and working styles for them.
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 resulted in increased productivity and more free
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 for their personal lives,
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 increased income for businesses. As an example, some people set aside a day for their hobbies in order to complete all tasks more quickly and make personal
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 for themselves.
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, studying or working from home has various positive impacts
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 as leisure
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 and efficiency at work and it has more favourable options for companies and schools.
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 abroad style will get more popular,
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 everywhere use
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 system with the development of technology, artificial intelligence, and robots.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • e-learning
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • productivity
  • personalized learning
  • disciplined routine
  • interpersonal skills
  • cybersecurity
  • sustainability
  • work-life balance
  • physical disabilities
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