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Today many people use the internetand smartphones to transfer money to the famelies friends and business. Is it positive development or a negative development.

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Nowadays it is becoming more and more popular to utilize gadgets in order to make online bonking processes. Most
of
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individuals find it convenient and I agree
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To begin
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development
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 of the internet and technologies already became
the
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part of human life, there are numerous opportunities revealed currently . One of
such
 great achievements of people is online transfers and banking. With the support of paperless
bank
 services people started not only completing their
trasfers
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transfers
 faster and easier
,
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 but
also
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 the environment from increased deforestation. Another huge feature of
such
 services is the availability at needed
time
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 and
place
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,
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because
person
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people
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 might not expect certain
bank
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banks
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 everywhere and it lets to do processes at any time. Despite the fact that there are chances of scamming,
bank
 services designed fully-controlled authentication systems so that
a clients
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clients
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 can totally rely on
security
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 of their
bank
 accounts.
In addition
, people working far from their families and friends are now able to make
remitments
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 in the minutes of
emergency
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an emergency
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.
Besides
this
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 it had a grand
infuence
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influence
to
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 running
trandes
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trades
 as there is no more need for waiting particular documents or cheques. In conclusion,
although
 transferring
the
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money via special
apps
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 of banks is quite insecure and has a chance of a crime, it has a major beneficial effect
for
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 the improvement of technology and transaction
managements
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as well.
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