You have a full time job and are also doing a part time job evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter: - describe the situation - explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take.

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affairs in visiting the night English lessons. My name is Nodirbek and I am observing

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for Professionals ' English language scheme since 07.01.2023.

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a building site in Namangan. As you can comprehend, I will not any more be able to supervise my occasion to call for dusk language plan as my job place is far-flung from your academy.

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that much each day is going to be absolutely unlikely for me. So, herewith I would like to tell you my cogitates for being away in the evening lectures in the

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few days.

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, I would like to know whether I will be able to join the weekend classes as that would allow me to continue my course.

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. Please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nodirbek Abduqahhorov

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Governments should ban dangerous sports. Others think that people should have the freedom to do any sport activity. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A growing number of people rely or restaurants and convenience food (Frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?