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**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**

**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**
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This
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 graph compares how much Americans spent to how much
income
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 they made in 2013, by age group. The data shows an
overall
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 rise and fall in both
income
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 and spending between young, middle-aged, and older Americans.
Income
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 rises and falls more sharply than spending. Those under 25 and over 75 actually spent slightly more than they earned.
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, between the ages of 25 and 64, Americans earned 10,000 to 20,000
dollars
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 more than they spent.
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 difference shrinks in the 65-74 age group, where spending was just a few thousand
dollars
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 less. In terms of actual numbers, those under 25 or over 75 earned and spent around 30,000 and 35,000
dollars
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, respectively. 25-34 year-olds and 65-74 year-olds both earned in the 50,000s and spent in the 40,000s. In the middle, between ages 35 and 64,
income
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 was 70,000-80,000
dollars
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, and spending ranged from roughly 55 to 60 thousand.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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