Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Dev, Hope you and your family are doing well during
this
pandemic. I was informed that you are looking to go for
driving
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class. It is indeed,
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good decision to have your own driving license as you are your own driver and it is much safe than relying on others to drive to your destination. I have experienced that driving by
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is
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and economical. We can change our decision of destination at our convenience. I had the license recently and I went to Gulf driving
school
, one of the reputed driving
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in Doha. We often find promotional
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from the driving schools
however
the wait time is too long. So I would not suggest you
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trust
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as you might have to wait forever and
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even if you start the class, the trainers are in
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to complete the course to accommodate the next trainee in
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. The dedicated trainers
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Gulf driving
school
are much helpful and professional. They target
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success stories. They are flexible regarding the training timings.
Hence
I recommend you
this
school
because they genuinely value the customers. You are always welcome if you require any tips from my end as I too used to seek advice and tips from the ones who are licensed. I used to view
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YouTube and take the tips and strategies
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passing different levels of
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. After the
enrollment
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you will have to schedule the signal
test
. Mock tests will be provided through
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application, after passing the signal. You will be trained for the parking
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the road
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you will have to pass one
test
before you are scheduled for the next one. It would go long if I explain
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everything in
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.You can call me anytime at my number for
further
advice or experience. Take care Best Regards, Shama
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driving licence
  • Public transportation
  • Independence
  • Daily commutes
  • Emergency transportation
  • Self-reliance
  • Structured learning environment
  • Professional driving instructors
  • Advanced driving techniques
  • Safety awareness
  • Flexible timings
  • Weather conditions
  • Basic vehicle maintenance
  • Traffic signs
  • Theory test material
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