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Some people say that some urgent problems in modern society can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #society #cooperation
In the modern world people face lots of
problems
. A few among the mass say that some urgent issues in society can only be solved with international
cooperation
. I agree with the abovementioned statement and my point of view regarding
this
 explain in the following paragraph. There are several issues
countries
 can solve with good
cooperation
, first and foremost one is
that
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the environmental
problems
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 now people face the problem
about
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 global warming the developed
countries
 and developing
countries
 have
essential
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 role in increasing temperature,
such
 as different
type
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 of construction and factories
it
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emit many poisonous gas if the
countries
 have a mutual understanding they can reduce the use of it.
For instance
, the organization international panel on climate change (IPCC) maintain good interaction with all
countries
 to balance the temperature in the world. Another one is that
the
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terrorism if the
countries
 have
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cooperation
it
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can
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 from our society.
Lastly
, some
disease
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 can
be sort
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 out if
countries
 have a good relationship.
For example
, during covid
pandemic
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 some
countries
 find
the
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 vaccine against
virus
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it
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help to move
virus
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from
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 the world.
However
, some
problems
 cannot solve with
cooperation
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 of
countries
 .
Firstly
, the personal health
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 individual
take
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 initiative to maintain.
Secondly
, most of the undeveloped
countries
 depend on many organization
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 increase the financial burden of the developed
countries
.
To sum up
, the
above mentioned
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 argument
in
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 a nutshell. It can be concluded that international
corporation
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 can solve our
problems
, but these
problems
overpowered
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with
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 the collaboration of everyone.
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