A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter : Give details about what you know about the company. Explain your current situation. Give your answer to the offer and explain why.

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Dear Tom, Hope you’re doing well.

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, congratulations on receiving the "great place to

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" award. I am extremely delighted on receiving an offer for the position of

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lead web developer in your company. I have been hearing great things about your company, and how you provide solutions to the most challenging and complex problems. CGTech has always been good at providing a very simple and understandable user interface to

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customers. I am swamped with loads of work right now

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because the application which I have developed from scratch will be going live in the next couple of months. I am interested in taking up the role,

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I would like to join after three months since my current schedule is totally packed. I have always been interested to join your company as its priority is a non-pressurised work environment, which in turn leads to customer delight. Please consider my request for joining after three months. Looking forward to hearing from you. All the Best, Keisha Thomas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter : Give details about what you know about the company. Explain your current situation. Give your answer to the offer and explain why.

Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?