The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table charts compare the different numbers of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
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and
bananas
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consumption in five other nations in the years 1999 and 2004. It is noticeable that
Switzerland
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was the primary nation to sell
coffee
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in 1999,
while
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the British became the majority in 2004.
Additionally
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,
sales
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of
bananas
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in
Switzerland
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were always far ahead of other European countries in those given years.
Firstly
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, we see that the
sales
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of
coffee
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in the UK understood the most significant growth from 1.5
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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in 2004.
Similarly
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,
Switzerland
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experienced the same trend with the Seizedland
coffee
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sales
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in 1999(3
million
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euros
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) almost twice more
as
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than
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in 2004(6
million
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euros
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).
In addition
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, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden all slightly increased from 1.8 to 2, 1 to 1.7, and 0,8-1
million
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euros
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.
Secondly
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, the
sales
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of
bananas
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in
Switzerland
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in 1999 were 15
million
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euros
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and
then
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increased to 47
million
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euros
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in 2004.
By contrast
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, we can see the same trend in British, Sweden, and Denmark from 1999 to 2004. Only Sweden's
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banana
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bananas
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sales
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dropped from 1.8
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 1
million
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euros
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in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, switzerland, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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