The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table charts compare the different numbers of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
and
bananas
consumption in five other nations in the years 1999 and 2004. It is noticeable that
Switzerland
was the primary nation to sell
coffee
in 1999,
while
the British became the majority in 2004.
Additionally
,
sales
of
bananas
in
Switzerland
were always far ahead of other European countries in those given years.
Firstly
, we see that the
sales
of
coffee
in the UK understood the most significant growth from 1.5
million
euros
in 1999 to 20
million
euros
in 2004.
Similarly
,
Switzerland
experienced the same trend with the Seizedland
coffee
sales
in 1999(3
million
euros
) almost twice more
as
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than
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in 2004(6
million
euros
).
In addition
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden all slightly increased from 1.8 to 2, 1 to 1.7, and 0,8-1
million
euros
.
Secondly
, the
sales
of
bananas
in
Switzerland
in 1999 were 15
million
euros
and
then
increased to 47
million
euros
in 2004.
By contrast
, we can see the same trend in British, Sweden, and Denmark from 1999 to 2004. Only Sweden's
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banana
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bananas
sales
dropped from 1.8
million
euros
in 1999 to 1
million
euros
in 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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