The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives some information about the outcome of a survey about
people
’s buying and drinking habits in coffee
and tea
in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart
. It had three Correct word choice
and Hobart
part
:Fix the agreement mistake
parts
bought
fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
, bought
Wrong verb form
buying
instant
coffee
and went
to a Wrong verb form
going
cafe
for coffee
in the last
4 weeks.
It is clear that
people
in the five Australian cities went to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
in last
4 weeks were the most. Correct article usage
the last
Therefore
, people
are prefer
to go to a Change the verb form
prefer
cafe
for coffee
or tea
rather than bought fresh coffee
and instant
coffee
.And the people
who prefer to bought
fresh Change the verb
buy
coffee
is
the smallest , among Correct subject-verb agreement
are
three
of them.
From the Correct article usage
the three
people
bought
fresh Correct pronoun usage
who bought
coffee
, the percentage of city residents were
about under 45 in Sydney and Melbourne. And 35% of the residents Correct subject-verb agreement
was
is
in Change the verb form
are
other
three cities. It is Correct article usage
the other
also
clear that the percentage of people
who went to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
were
almost bigger than Change the verb form
was
bought
Wrong verb form
buying
instant
coffee
.It came up to over 60% in Sydney, Melbource
and Hobart. But in Adelaide, the Correct your spelling
Melbourne
people
who bought instant
coffee
was
slightly extra than went to a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cafe
or tea
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, instant, cafe, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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