As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you think the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Nowadays,
people
in development
Replace the word
developing
countries
desire to purchase a few cars
because of being rich. In my opinion, there are more disadvantages of buying several cars
for environment
than advantages. The essay will be discussed why Add an article
the environment
people
who live in rich countries
want to own many vehicles and provided relevant answers to the question.
To start with, presently individuals in wealth
Replace the word
wealthy
countries
would like to buy several vehicles in order to relieve their chore
. Indeed having own Fix the agreement mistake
chores
car
is good ways
in some Fix the agreement mistake
way
position
. Fix the agreement mistake
positions
For instance
, someone who has own
vehicle does not find it difficult to go somewhere. They reach their destination on time when they drive with their Correct pronoun usage
their own
his own
her own
car
. Moreover
, it is much more comfortable than local transportation. They are not nervous or do not perspire when they go to work by
Change preposition
in
their
Change the word
the
car
. In addition
, people
who have their own car
do not depend on someone's vehicle.
In
the other hand, there are Change preposition
On
much
more negative Correct quantifier usage
many
side
of having transport for Fix the agreement mistake
sides
environment
. First of all, transportations cause to pollute Add an article
the environment
air
and make noise. They Add an article
the air
effect
serious problems for Replace the word
affect
environment
. Add an article
the environment
Secondly
Vehicles impact terribly Add a comma
,Secondly
people
's health such
as lung cancer , asthma, heart attack and so on. Thirdly
, they cause traffic jums
so as to be more. Correct your spelling
jams
For example
, people
in my country have three or four cars
in each person in their family. Sometimes they do not know where to park their vehicle due not to blank place. Lastly
more fossil fuel is reduced by transportation. It is dangerous Add a comma
,Lastly
for
nature
Change preposition
to
To conclude
, people
live
in rich Correct pronoun usage
who live
countries
buy more cars
however
this
situation is bad for human beings. I have tried to relevant answers in my essay to question
.Correct article usage
the question
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