People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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system

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have been set as

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mandatory in certain countries. it is often argued that the

taxes

should be removed to ensure that everyone can own an exact amount of

the

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salary rather than handling it to the

government

.

However

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I strongly agree that

state

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has already received an amount of funds from

government

thus

is no longer

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necessary to collect an additional tax from citizens.

Firstly

,

government

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has delegated part of the funds towards the state’s council in order to be utilized by the public facilities or other development projects. By having

this

approach, states should always prioritize the well-being of

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as

taxes

literally caused a heavy burden towards everyone.

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, Singapore is considered

as

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one of the

stressful

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countries to live in because of

the

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heavy

tax’s

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policy.

Secondly

,

taxes

are eventually embedded in our daily life and are likely to have the greater potential to cause a heavy expense in the community.

Thus

,

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system should be re-considerate by the country’s rulers. Undeniably, the world’s

economy

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statistics have indicated that the

overall

poverty rate has

rose

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steadily since the pandemic outbreak. People are being forced to work in two different jobs just for a living and don’t even have the opportunity to spend it personally but

to

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purpose. On the other

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, it is worth mentioning that the unfortunate kids in Africa are no longer gain

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equal opportunity to enjoy a healthy meal on their table

and

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lead

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to a public health consequence

which

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known

it

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as undernourished.

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fortifies

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fact that

,

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taxes

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rate not only

have

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to reduce but must be totally eradicated from the country alternately to mitigate the families’ burden. In conclusion,

according to

the examples and arguments given, I strongly believe that

government

should take greater measures to ensure

taxes

policy have to be removed to ensure the welfare of the

overall

community.