What do you think is the greatest contribution of your country in the field of science and technology? Describe it and explain why it is of great importance. Give details and examples in your explanation.

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Mr. Frank T. Chiasson General Manager Micro-Computer Corporation 6365 Main Street Bathurst, N.B. E2A 4Y4 Dear Frank, We've discussed the advantages and disadvantages of instituting a job-sharing project on several occasions. Because of a shortage of computer programmers, I would like to try a job-sharing project on a trial basis.
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women have contacted us about job-sharing. They live in a general area of our new facility and have heard that we needed programmers. We have checked their references and found that they have good recommendations from their former employers. None of the
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wants to work full-time because each has small children. We would like to try the job-sharing arrangement with these
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women. They have worked out their work and babysitting schedules and the schedules fit our needs. I recommend a six-month trial period. I realize there will be increased benefit costs in some areas because we will have
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people on the payroll
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a shortage of programmers that I feel the increase is acceptable. Please let me know what you think. I'd like to start the project on April 10th, 2023. Sincerely, Linda Smith
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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