In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their leaves of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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weight

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sign

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which can express how healthy

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you are;

however

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it is likely to have

higher

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a higher

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average

weight

of

people

in many countries at present.

Economic

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crisis is the main problem of

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situation, and

Ministry

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the Ministry

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of Public

Health

should be responsible for solving

this

problem. One of the most important problems is that many countries face

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economic issues since the COVID-19 pandemic

have

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been spread out around the world for more than 3 years.

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can be the

causes

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cause

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of

people

's average

weight

are

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rising

due to

people

could not go out to have more activities and

also

when

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time

return

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back to

normal

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lifetime,

people

get used to

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the same

behaviors

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as

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and

sleep

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.

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,

according to

the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it revealed that 80% of

people

who had been

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from home in the

last

3 years tend to have higher cholesterol

level

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levels

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and the waistline has

increasing

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increased

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. Having said that

ecomomic

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economic

crisis plays a major role in unhealthy

behaviors

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behaviours

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. In order to solve

this

issue,

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the Minitry

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Minitry

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Ministry

of Public

Health

should take action as soon as possible. The most significant solution to support

this

the

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fact that

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the

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minitry

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ministry

of public

health

ought to promote and acknowledge

people

about the dangers of

overweight

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being overweight

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. To illustrate

this

, in recent news, it has been reported that 80% of

people

who have

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an awareness

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of the drawback of

overweight

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being overweight

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tend to have better

health

behaviors

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behaviours

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such

as more

exercises

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exercise

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and

choose

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choosing

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to have healthy food. By doing

this

, the

weight

is

decline

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to 45% compared to those who have not been encouraged by the campaigns. In conclusion,

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being overwieght

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overwieght

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overweight

is

incresing

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increasing

in many countries,

people

abandons

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to

do

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apply

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exercise or

to

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be

awareness

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about

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of

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heath

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health

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which can trigger

the

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serious

health

problems;

therefore

the

ministry

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Ministry

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of public

health

should promote and support

people

to have more healthy

behaviors

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behaviours

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.