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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates the production of
milk
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 in a year in four nations, including the Netherlands; Australia; Tanzania; and Guatemala, in 1990, 2000, and 2010 respectively.
Overall
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, the supply of
milk
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 in the majority of countries displayed an upward trend during the surveyed period, except Australia. On top of that, the Netherlands accounted for the largest proportion,
while
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 Guatemala produced the least amount of
milk
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. Despite the number experiencing a drop between 1990 and 2000 to 11,155
thousand
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 litres, the Netherlands remained the largest supplier of
milk
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 among others, in the following 10 years, the figure went up to 11,466
thousand
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 litres in 2010.
Moreover
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, Tanzania,
as well as
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 Guatemala underwent a surge in the same span of years, the former doubling from 87
thousand
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 to 155
thousand
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, and the latter surging from 26
thousand
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 to 84
thousand
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, which remained the lowest production throughout the surveyed years.
On the other hand
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, as the second largest supplier of
milk
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, Australia went through a continued decrease between 1990 to 2010, leading the data down to 9,165
thousand
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 in 2010, compared to 11,246
thousand
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 litres in 1990.

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