In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

In some countries, people
thinking
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about
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that
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children
can’t
working
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work
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in the
time
, because they are still in
the
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school
for
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to
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study
,
that’s
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that
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will
be
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apply
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effect
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affect
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schoolwork. In
my
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fact, I disagree
this
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point,
although
UNICEF and ILO show
about
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research
of
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on
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kids forced to be a worker,
that’s
me partition the topic, one for
children
still
study
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studying
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and another part
of
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for
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kids who can’t
study
only to live
to for
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apply
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work
.
First,
if
children
can
be
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study
and learn in
the
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time
, even spend some take reset
time
for
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working, in my
option
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opinion
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that’s
just
get
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to get
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more experience, have
for
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apply
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children
know
make
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making
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money
was
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is
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tough,
that’s
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that
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will be thinking about how to use they’re economy and tame cost in the life.
For example
, when I was 8 years old, my mom’s friend
has
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had
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a job for dispatch
the
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throwaway, and my mom told me I
can
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could
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work
in
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on
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my holiday and get the
coin
, I tried and get some
coin
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coins
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, and
then
I still remember
I
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apply
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walking on the street and the day is very hottest in my memory. The ordeal has known
with
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to
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me,
what
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that
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every
money
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piece of money
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or
coin
is
preciousness
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precious
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, after that
time
, when I get
money
, I always tell me don’t waste
ever
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every
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coin
.
Secondly
, other part
children
were taken
a
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as
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worker
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workers
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and
keep
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kept
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live
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living
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in the world, they
were claim
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were claimed
were claiming
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from
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by
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an adult
the adult
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adult
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adults
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, the adult oblige of kid go to
work
get
money
for they became
a
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apply
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child
labor
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labour
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, compare I disagree
this
happened in our world, because we know only learning and studying become
a
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life, and the little guys didn’t any choice, they will always in the roll.
In
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finally
, I agree
children
have
learning
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learned
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can go to
work
get the grow,
on the other
hand
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hand,
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I disagree
that’s
not learning of
children
go to
work
, because they must
study
in
the
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apply
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school,
however
not go to
work
for life,
study
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the study
a study
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should
be occupy
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be occupied
be occupying
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they almost
time
.
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