You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam,

This

is to inform you that I purchased a laptop

charger

from your outlet

last

week, which I started using for my

work

. The

charger

was in good condition of working for quite some time, but later a few days, it created an issue with the charging wire.

Due to

this

, I am facing difficulties to charge my laptop. I have to complete one of my important client meeting presentations for

this

week. I have already started working on the presentation and am verge of completing the

work

, by that time my manager gave trouble and

due to

this

, am unable to complete my

work

. If am not complete the presentation on time and send it to the client,

this

may lead to a bad impression of our

work

. Considering, the importance of my

work

. Please send the technician to my house to diagnose my

charger

wire. So, they can identify the issue and solve the issue of my laptop

charger

wire. Regards Appadurai K

Submitted by appadurai5494 on Mon May 01 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

167 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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