Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about an issue, I am facing, since, I purchased a laptop from your shop. Kindly register an official complaint about

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incident. Since yesterday evening, my brand-new laptop restarting intermittently. I tried to check at my level by asking people around with no success. What is more, now, I am unable to start it at all, I checked the battery as well, but all looks good. I have meetings to attend about my work and

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to that, I need to work on my office project. I am unable to perform any job

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it is impacting my timeline of work. Please assist me on an urgent basis. You may arrange for a person to fix the laptop at my place. If the person is not available to travel. I will be happy to visit the store. Please call me directly on my mobile number provided below. I am hoping for an immediate response to solve

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issue. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Mr. Tushar Bhujbal

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May 1, 2023

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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180 words

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Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do Write at least 150 words.

many people believe that number of unhealthy people will increase in the future, while others think it will decrease. what is your opinion?

It is becoming increasing popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others say that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food taht is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? I sthis a positive or Negative developement