Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to your friend and include: Where the key is Instructions to look after the apartment What should he/ she do on the day of your return

Dear Anna, Hope you find my letter in the best of spirits. As you know, when you will be staying at my home next month for your bank training in my city. I will not be in my city because of my business conference

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Italy but I have made all arrangements for your stay at my home. My building manager has the duplicate key to my home. His name is David Young and his contact number is 647-771-9910. I asked him to provide my apartment keys to you on your arrival here. When you enter the building, his office is just on the right side of the building door. As you know, I am living in a newly built apartment, so, it is fully equipped with modern facilities. I will put the temperature control remote on the glass table. You can adjust the temperature as per your needs. If you find difficulty in operating any equipment, you can call my building manager. In your free time, I suggest you visit nearby places

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as Square One Mall, and Kariya Park, and do not miss to visit AJ coffee shop. You will find the best-ever coffees here. I have

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arranged your trip to Toronto on the weekend with my friend Arjun. We will have an enjoyable time together when I get back, and explore more in my city. Give regards to your parents and have a safe journey. Yours Truly, Kanwal

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Jul 2, 2025

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Add some details to improve the description of your apartment.

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You have a friendly tone, which is great for a letter to a friend.

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You included all important information, like the key location and instructions.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to your friend and include: Where the key is Instructions to look after the apartment What should he/ she do on the day of your return

Nowadays, many people move away from their friends and family for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at University. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue on the society?

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