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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree or disagree.

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It has been observed that, with the entire globe becoming under one roof, eventually a plethora of nations have officially declared dual languages or replaced them with other ones. To a large extent, I believe that
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 jeopardising situation not only affects
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 social matters but
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 generates practical problems. Knowledge of
language
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 is a key factor in proper communication between individuals. If
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 was not convenient between them, they might be getting into trouble in their social and professional lives. Even though it does not matter how much time they spend living in the same country, An example of a social problem is related to love, friendship, marriage, and numerous other types of social relationships between
people
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. Living jubilantly, mankind needs allies between the
people
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 of societies, and it was ultimately connected to that foreign
language
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 that was used by the
people
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 of the country.
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, for the evidence of practical problems, individuals suffer from joblessness, better education, a growth-able career, and a number of
people
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 do not travel well
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 international
language
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 problems. Lack of
language
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 skills becomes detrimental for
people
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 if they choose to study, work, or live in societies with foreign cultures. A group of
people
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 believe that they didn't want to tackle any difficulties with
language
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 because they were anticipating doing their preparation for it.
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, with the help of technology, a person can easily understand a particular
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. In conclusion,
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 technology can help in understanding international linguistics for better communication, social and practical issues remain unsolved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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