The line graph gives information about a number of using of public transportation system by different ages and location of dwellers in 2016.

The line graph gives information about a number of using of public transportation system by different ages and location of dwellers in 2016.
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The line graph gives information about the number of uses of public transportation systems by different ages and locations of dwellers in 2016.
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, the beginning of the large city
residents
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was high.
Although
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it reached an apex, the proportion of dwellers plunged
at the end
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of the year. Other
residents
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were on the bottom. There was fluctuation and stability. Concerning the
residents
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of the large city, it started at almost 40 per
cent
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by 0-15. The rate skyrocketed to over 60 per
cent
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until 31-45 years old people.
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, there was an increase, it plunged to 10 per
cent
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by 61-75.
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, fortunately, the percentage of the
age
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group
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grew by 5 per
cent
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when it comes to the
age
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group
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of 76+. The starting point of other
residents
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was 15 per
cent
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by 0-15, which increased slightly to approximately 30 % by 16-30. Even though the percentage of the
age
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group
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fell to its starting point of 31-45, there was a stability of 15 per
cent
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from 31-45 to 46-60. Having grown negligibly to 20 % by
age
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group
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of dwellers who were 61-75 years old, there was a slight decrease of 13 per
cent
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by 76+.
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