In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

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In most under-developed nations, there

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the problem of rampant

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which over the years, has taken its toll on our environment. The only way to partially alleviate

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negatively escalating situation is to educate the population about the despondent situation that we

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our future

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may face. The drastic fall in the quality of air and water, from both industries and individuals, affects the habitat in

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a way that it will affect both, the current

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the future

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. The major reason

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the excessive and uncontrolled contamination of water bodies

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the exploitation of exhaustible resources

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as petrol and diesel. To explain

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with a clearer example, many major cities in India are polluted to

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an extent that people cannot leave their houses without covering their

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and nose. In an effort to overcome

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problem, the population has to be taught to refrain from the callous and pervicacious attitude through campaigns and education from a very small age. To prevent air

pollution

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by vehicles, people must be educated to regularly check their vehicles for

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, children must be taught about the importance of the environment at an elementary level.

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, most countries advertise the harmful effects of

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through commercials and street banners, which

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proven to be very effective.

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what has been said above, educating the community can help to level off the declining quality of air and water.

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will ensure that the future

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will not have to suffer

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our negligence towards the environment

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advatnages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.

Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

(QG) In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?