The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates a survey’s results concerning Australian
coffee
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and tea consumption habits in five different cities in the
last
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four weeks.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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most people preferred going to a
cafe
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for either
coffee
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or tea,
while
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only a small portion bought fresh
coffee
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.
Additionally
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, Melbourne is the
city
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with the highest proportion of citizens who went to a
cafe
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,
in contrast
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to Adelaide being the lowest. In the
last
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four weeks, every
city
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had more than 55% of their population, the absolute majority, going to a
cafe
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, except for Adelaide. Less than half of Adelaide’s citizens venture to a
cafe
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for
coffee
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or tea, making it the only
city
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where most people enjoyed buying instant
coffee
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over other methods. Despite that, Hobart has the highest percentage of residents buying instant
coffee
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, at 54%. Regarding the percentage of citizens buying fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks, it is the lowest number in any
city
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.
However
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, the people of Sydney and Melbourne did make it a habit to buy fresh
coffee
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, as more than 43% and 42% of the population did so respectively.
In contrast
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, merely 34%, almost 35%, and 37% of the
city
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residents in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart bought fresh
coffee
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in turn.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cafe, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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