The supplied pie chart enumerates the comparison of the online shopping for selling section in Cabada from 2005 to 2010.
The supplied pie chart enumerates the comparison of the online shopping for selling section in Cabada from 2005 to 2010.
in general, all of the sectors are
distribured
evenly,Correct your spelling
distributed
however
, it is clear that
the figure of
electronics and Change preposition
for
appliance
was one of the most popular in both Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
years
.
As can be seen, there are four types of sales.First of all,sales of electronics and appliance
were the highest percentage of over one in three in 2005.Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
Although
, 5 years
later this
figure had decreased and went down from 35% to thirty per
cent.The share of home furnishing met the same fate and fell from 25% to a small minority(15%) in 5 Change preposition
apply
years
period.There is also
an indicator of video games that had 18% in 2005 and was rising over the years
with growth
of 5% and reached almost a quarter in 2010.The Sector of food and beverage revealed the largest improvement from about one in four(22%) to 32 per cent,Add an article
the growth
furthermore
, it went from third place in 2005 to the
first in 2010.Correct article usage
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