The graph presents the average house prices in three countries, A, B, and C, between 1997 and 2004

The graph presents the average house prices in three countries, A, B, and C, between 1997 and 2004
The graph presents the average house
prices
in three
countries
, A,
B
, and
C
, between 1997 and 2004
Overall
, average housing
prices
in all three
countries
had generally increased. In general,
country
A’s average house cost was more expensive than those of
countries
B
and
C
.
Country
A’s average cost increased from $130K in 1997 to $510K in 2003. It is witnessed that there was a fall of $80K between 2003 and 2006. Until 2014, when
prices
peaked at $625K. In 1997, the average price in
countries
B
and
C
was approximately $125,000.
Then
, in 2005, the average house price in
country
B
had an increase to about $375K.
Whereas
prices
in
country
C
had a sharp fall to around $250K by 2007.
Country
B
's
prices
were markedly fell
Change the verb form
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from 2005 to 2008. Until 2012,
prices
fell to $500K
at the end
of the period.
Otherwise
,in 2008,
prices
in
country
C
declined
then
it rose steadily until 2013.
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