The bar chart below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

The bar chart  below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world  for the year 2014.
This
bar chart illustrates in comparison of nine different Scotland's industrial export between the
UK
and the rest of the
world
in 2014.
Overall
, Scotland exported outside the
world
more than the
UK
with the notable exception of Electrical and Instrument Engineering. Looking specifically at the
UK
, Chemicals and Minerals products and Manufacturing of food and drink had the highest number with 5
billion
and 4.4
billion
. The third place was Electrical instrument Engineering 4 tons, which was the only higher proportion of the industry more than the rest of the
world
(2.3
billions
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). The other 6 departments had less than 2.1
billion
in the
UK
. Regarding the rest of the
world
,
The
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Hotel and Restaurant Services were the most popular among those 13.8
billion
. The second was Chemicals and Mineral products 9.5
billion
,The third was Wholsea and retail 8.2
billion
. The other 6 sectors had less than 6
billion
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, world, billion with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • International regions
  • Trade relationships
  • Economic impact
  • Market analysis
  • Notable differences
  • Trade trends
  • Speculation
  • Variation
  • Significance
  • Impact
  • Prevalent factors
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