You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. Explain the occasion to him. Invite him to the party. Tell him why you want him to perform.

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Dear Sir, My name is Amandeep Singh and I am writing

this

letter to invite you to my 50th birthday party next week. I have kept a small get-together for my family and friends and it would be great if we can have you at our place. The party will start around 9 pm at the Orchid Resort. We have kept the dress code as black for the occasion as it is my wife's favourite colour. It would be great if you can follow that.If you need any

further

details or information regarding the program please feel free to contact me over the phone or email. My kids consider you as their idol and they would be really happy to see you perform. I am sending you an advance token for your service. The rest of the payment will follow after your performance. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Amandeep.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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6 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. Explain the occasion to him. Invite him to the party. Tell him why you want him to perform.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort.

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -explain the important event -apologise for the stuation -suggest a new arrangement

You recently stayed at a hotel conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaint.

In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+