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Many people belive that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. what are these problems and how could they be reduced ?

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Films can be the determinant of the way
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humans
behaviour
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 in society. To be more precise, individuals copy some actions of their favourite characters.
Therefore
, a big share of people
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 that depicted violence leads to severe social problems.
This
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 issue and propose some solutions.
To begin
 with, the selection of a violent person from a movie as a role model causes a negative shift in consciousness towards aggressive doings and an unpleasant attitude
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 the whole environment.
For example
, there is a handsome actor in the film "American Psycho", who
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 the main role of a killer with psychological problems, but the female audience
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 him as a beautiful man without respect to the state of his mind.
Hence
, they will seek someone similar in real life not paying attention to the danger and as a solution, it is essential to analyse all aspects of the personality of a particular character to avoid possible illusions.
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 popularity among the younger generation influencing their games and interests.
For instance
, many of them do not even regard murder as a problem after the movie of
this
 genre.
Consequently
, aggressive behaviour is observed towards family members or friends and
this
 increases a need for more strict control from the government, in fact, children should not be allowed to go to the cinema to trillers under they
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 a particular age.
Apart from
this
, it should be supported by their parents forbidding them to see violent scenes on the home TV. In conclusion, it is a huge problem having an impact on the peace of
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the
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society.
Moreover
, some measures are needed to be
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,
such
 as deep analysis, government restrictions and parents' control.
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