Many people belive that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. what are these problems and how could they be reduced ?
Films can be the determinant of the way
of
humans Change preposition
apply
behaviour
in society. To be more precise, individuals copy some actions of their favourite characters. Replace the word
behave
Therefore
, a big share of people supposes
that depicted violence leads to severe social problems. Correct subject-verb agreement
suppose
This
essay will discuss problems associated with this
issue and propose some solutions.
To begin
with, the selection of a violent person from a movie as a role model causes a negative shift in consciousness towards aggressive doings and an unpleasant attitude to
the whole environment. Change preposition
toward
For example
, there is a handsome actor in the film "American Psycho", who had
the main role of a killer with psychological problems, but the female audience Wrong verb form
has
considered
him as a beautiful man without respect to the state of his mind. Wrong verb form
considers
Hence
, they will seek someone similar in real life not paying attention to the danger and as a solution, it is essential to analyse all aspects of the personality of a particular character to avoid possible illusions.
Furthermore
, trillers gain
popularity among the younger generation influencing their games and interests. Wrong verb form
gained
For instance
, many of them do not even regard murder as a problem after the movie of this
genre. Consequently
, aggressive behaviour is observed towards family members or friends and this
increases a need for more strict control from the government, in fact, children should not be allowed to go to the cinema to trillers under they reached
a particular age. Wrong verb form
reach
Apart from
this
, it should be supported by their parents forbidding them to see violent scenes on the home TV.
In conclusion, it is a huge problem having an impact on the peace of Correct article usage
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, some measures are needed to be done
, Verb problem
taken
such
as deep analysis, government restrictions and parents' control.Submitted by nastyarozenson.17 on
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