Some people think that young criminals should receive the same punishments as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that equal punishments ought to be executed

criminals

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regardless of their

age

. I mostly disagree with

this

suggestion because the young

do

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not

be

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aware of

crimes

and penalties as the old do and they have more tendencies to

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due to

their

age

.

Firstly

, most of

young

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the young

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people do not know and recognize about

crimes

and their sentences. They may do some improper

actions

without conscious and knowing to be blamed.

For example

, they may be used in smuggling

due to

their

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or they may be blamed in a car crash owing to their distracting riding on a bike.

Hence

, they are often innocent or

be

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unaware

in

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crime incidents because they are not noticed

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laws and criminal

actions

.

Thus

, they should not be evaluated as same as adults in the courts.

Secondly

, the young are prone to commit flaws as much as the old.

Due to

their youth energy, they do not recognize issues in their

actions

and they do not foresee their wrongdoings’ responsibilities which correspond

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the law terminology. To illustrate that, many young people do not avoid

to

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using drugs at least one time in order to prove their feat to their friends.

In addition

, they do not fear to be in

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with groups to show their loyalty to their neighbours. Unfortunately, these examples are counted as

crimes

and they may be imprisoned. Looking

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cases in terms of their

age

and experience, they reserve several

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in their lives.

Thus

, they should be privileged in the laws. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with

this

suggestion.

Although

some riot acts may be behaved like

as

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adults in the courts

such

as terrorist

actions

and involving massacres, in my opinion, young people’s

crimes

ought to be assessed differently than adults

due to

their

age

and low awareness about the

crimes

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