Some people thinks that watching news is good for individuals and some thinks not . discuss both views and also give your opinion
It has been argued that spending
time
watching the news can be very helpful for people
while
some think it is just a waste of time
. In my opinion, people
should watch the news as it provides them with global knowledge. However
, information shared through media is not always true.
Technology advancements make it possible to communicate around the globe in a real-time
. Since people
are connected around the world, they should know what is happening in different countries. For example
, a resident of India, who is working from Canada, would like to know the current affairs of his home country so that he can plan accordingly
. Further
, information shared over television can be very helpful to people
to plan their day. These days, the media covers live traffic updates and weather forecasts, which is helping people
a lot. Thus
, people
need to keep themselves updated.
On the other hand
, television channels these days are not covering the facts rather they are focussing on the stories. Because they focus on profitability, they spend time
on irrelevant stories which waste people
's time
. For instance
, one TV channel covered a death case of a celebrity and portrayed that as murder, trying to maximize the viewership. Hence
, people
should avoid watching such
coverage.
In conclusion, although
some media houses are
not Verb problem
do
sharing
real information, in my view, watching the news is still very useful and one should see it daily. If there are any nuisances, Wrong verb form
share
people
have to learn to filter those and be selective in their content choice
.Fix the agreement mistake
choices
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task response
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and states your position. The conclusion should also summarize your main points and restate your opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) and a clear organizational structure to better connect your ideas and improve coherence.