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waste from home is recycled and it is asserted that the only way for increasing recycling

#waste #home
It is argued that not enough of the waste from home is recycled and it is asserted that the only way for increasing recycling is governmental supervision it means that
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the law
have
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 to implement laws about recycling and supervise about the execution of
such
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.  Putting
such
act
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 into action might be impactful. Surveying of loads of houses in research shows that most of
nation
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are
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 not  passionate about recycling just because of vacillating And
also
 they do not desire to bother themselves.
Although
community
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 are aware of the productivity of
such
 an act. Implementing mandatory
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 will help the environment and assists that fewer trees will be cut down
whereas
  avoiding deforestation.  Apart from that, if
nation
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coact
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 with the authority by separating dry from wet it will help the authority by providing new job opportunities.  In conclusion,I personally believe that
authority
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 have to convince
its
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 nation about the advantages of recycling and encourage
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 to not throw away their recyclable garbage.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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