The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The supplied graph provides information about average monthly temperatures in London, New
York
and Sydney
while
the table illustrates the total hours
per year of sunshine in these cities.
Overall
, it can be easily apparent that Sydney
’s figure is comparatively higher than others whereas
in New York
the number of hours
shining is more than London
and Change preposition
in London
Sydney
ones.
Getting back to details, Sydney
’s data started from just over 25 degrees during January then
dropped to roughly 15%, before getting back to approximately the same proportion at the end
of the year. On the other hand
, the figures of New York
and London experienced relatively equal changes throughout the year albeit opposite Sydney
their temperature goes up during the summer.
In terms of the sunshine, New York
and Sydney
have the highest annual number of hours
with 2,473 and 2535 hours
respectively. London’s data is considerably lower than those with less than 1200 hours
.Submitted by elitsankova2005 on
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