The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The supplied graph provides information about average monthly temperatures in London, New
York
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Sydney
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while
the table illustrates the total Linking Words
hours
per year of sunshine in these cities.
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Overall
, it can be easily apparent that Linking Words
Sydney
’s figure is comparatively higher than others Use synonyms
whereas
in New Linking Words
York
the number of Use synonyms
hours
shining is more than Use synonyms
London
and Change preposition
in London
Sydney
ones.
Getting back to details, Use synonyms
Sydney
’s data started from just over 25 degrees during January Use synonyms
then
dropped to roughly 15%, before getting back to approximately the same proportion Linking Words
at the end
of the year. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the figures of New Linking Words
York
and London experienced relatively equal changes throughout the year albeit opposite Use synonyms
Sydney
their temperature goes up during the summer.
In terms of the sunshine, New Use synonyms
York
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Sydney
have the highest annual number of Use synonyms
hours
with 2,473 and 2535 Use synonyms
hours
respectively. London’s data is considerably lower than those with less than 1200 Use synonyms
hours
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