The diagram below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides data about the alterations of the Grand Park over the period of time from 1920 when it was opened to nowadays.
Overall
, it is evident that it experienced plenty of modifications.In particular
, the enlargement of the range of facilities and reorganisation of the existing ones.
According to
the diagram, in 1920 the large fountain is observed in the centre of the park and the stage for musicians on the right side of it surrounded by rose gardens on the top and bottom, also
behind them visitors can notice seats. Additionally
, there is one more rose garden nearby by the pond for water plants in the higher right corner of the scheme. Moreover
, the glasshouse and seats can be seen lower on the same side of the map. Furthermore
, in 1920 there exist two entrances, to be more precise, one from the side of Arnold Avenue and the other from Eldon Street. By contrast
, nowadays guests can enter the public park from one more gate located in the right bottom corner of the graph, apart from
this
, centre facilities were removed, in fact, the stage was replaced by an amphitheatre and fountain by the rose garden with seats around it, besides
, the cafe, children's play area, water feature were
constructed.Change the verb form
was
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