You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipement that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter . Describe the problem with the equipement . explain how this problem affecting to your work. .say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the poor quality of your product. I clearly remember that one week ago I went to your store to purchase a printer which I needed to use. When I got acquainted with the equipment, your employee informed me that its advantages and high quality.

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, I bought

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device. After that, when I came home and unpacked it and

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, plugged it in . Unfortunately, when I put the paper in order to copy a document the red light turned on for a

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but suddenly, it turned off and it happened several times. To tell the truth, I was a little offended because I absolutely believed in the quality of your shop.

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why I am writing

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letter to you. I would be grateful if you repair it or exchange it for another one. I look forward to your reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, ANNA JOHNSON

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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