The charts below show what uk graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate graduate and postgraduate
students
' plan
who did not find a full-time Fix the agreement mistake
plans
job
after their graduation in the UK in the year 2008.
Overall
, the number of graduate students
are
much higher than postgraduate ones. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
In addition
, it is crystal clear that most of the graduates and postgraduates continued their FE (further
education) in that specific year. In contrast
, a few of the juveniles in this
age range preferred to do some voluntary work after finishing their study.
In the graduates
chart, 29665 Change to a genitive case
graduate's
graduates'
students
continued their further
study
in 2008. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
On the other hand
, only 3500 of them did some voluntary job
. About 16000 of
juveniles were unemployed after Change preposition
apply
the
graduation and Correct article usage
apply
also
about half of the total amount of people in this
chart found a part-time job
as a way to live the rest of their lives.
In the postgraduates chart, there was just a little difference between the amount
of young people who were interested in the HE (higher education) and the ones who found Change the quantifier
number
a part-time work
. The amount of them Remove the article
part-time work
a part-time job
were
2725 and 2535 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
students
in each segment respectively. There were a few postgraduate students
about 345 who chose to do voluntary job
after finishing Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
university’s
courses in 2008.Correct article usage
the university’s
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