Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions would you suggest?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Industrial activities
Pollutants
Air pollution
Water pollution
Soil pollution
Harmful gases
Chemicals
Exhaust emissions
Carbon monoxide
Nitrogen oxides
Pesticides
Fertilizers
Urbanization
Natural habitats
Waste production
Deforestation
Biodiversity
Cleaner technologies
Regulatory policies
Public transportation
Electric vehicles
Vehicular emissions
Organic farming
Sustainable waste management
Reforestation
Afforestation
Ecosystems

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Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions would you suggest?

Your opinion

in spite of advancements made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

4-Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.