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The charts below display the percentage of the area and the current population of the seven continents of the earth.

The charts below display the percentage of the area and the current population of the seven continents of the earth.
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The description
about
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of
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 the
peecentage
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percentage
 of
world
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the world
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land
 area and the current
population
of
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apply
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across the Spehere
is illustrate
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 by rendered pie charts.
Overall
, it is apparent that Asia and South
america
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America
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 cover the maximum
land
 in territories
along with
 communities. The
norrhen
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northern
 area least in space and even in the density of
population
. Asia and
the
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apply
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South
America
 owing
a
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apply
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land
at
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to
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highest
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the highest
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 extent. Two and third in a tenth. Respectively,
whereas
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apply
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the
north
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North
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America
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American
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 residential area was 4℅ lesser than
southern
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the southern
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 part of
America
. Europe and
antartica
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Antarctica
hovering
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hovered
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 at 6℅, 7℅.ocean was less than
one tenth
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one-tenth
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. Just opposite to it
africa's
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Africa's
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land
more
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is more
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 than
ocean
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the ocean
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 about 3℅. In
northern
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the northern
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 hemisphere, the
population
 is under
the
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apply
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half.
Which
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South
America
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American
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 and
europe
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Europe
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 civilization comes under the quarter by the
merge
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merger
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.
Respecrively
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Respectively
, whilst,
the
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apply
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North
America
 is about 8℅.lied with 4 and 5℅ lesser than prior information. Otherside the minority of
population
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the population
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 reside in Antarctica. Approximately, 0.50℅.
This
 was 5℅ less than
africa
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Africa
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. Paradoxically,
the
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apply
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Asia merely
cover
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covers
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the
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a
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 significant
perportion
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proportion
per portion
by
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of
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 their communities at 61℅.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, population, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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