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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have talent for.Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation.

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It is believed by some individuals that many engaged in the
job
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 that they dislike or have flair for.
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 outcomes in detail. There are two major reasons
people
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 do the
work
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 that they do not like in
life
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.
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,
lack
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 of educational knowledge to fit into their dream jobs.When an individual is unable to go
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through academic training
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 supposed to equip and build him
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lack
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 of financial support or limited educational institution,
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an individual
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 will be left with the option is taking up any available
job
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 in other to survive in
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.
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,parental influence on the course of their
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 can make
people
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to
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do the
work
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 that they hate.Some
parents
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 failed to give their
children
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 the opportunity to
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 what they want to become in the future.They force their little ones to
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 and study what they have
interest
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 in, against the wishes of their
children
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.
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 may eventually cause
such
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individual
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an individual
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 to take up
the
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job
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 he does not have passion for just to satisfy his
parents
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.
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,an individual who is a medical practitioner working as a Doctor not because of his interest in caring for the sick but because he wants to follow his
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parents
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 instruction. There are two major implications of
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 trend.First and foremost, it makes an individual to be less productive at
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.When a person is doing what he does not like,there will be contribution with little effort in the
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 and
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 may lead to low
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 output.
In addition
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,
lack
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 of sense of fulfilment is another effect of not doing
ones
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one's
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 dream
job
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.When an individual
take
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 up a
job
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 he does not like
through out
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throughout
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 his
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life time
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lifetime
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,he will feel he has
bot
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not
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been fulfill
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been fulfilled
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 in
life
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.
This
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 may lead to
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lack
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a lack
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 of self-actualization
ans
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and
such
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individual
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an individual
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 may see himself as a failure.
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,some who retired as a lawyer
instead
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 of
teacher
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teachers
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 may not be happy about
about
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how
he
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they
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 spent
his
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their
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life
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. In conclusion,
people
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 do the jobs they don't have
interest
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an interest
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 in because they don't have access to educational training and
due to
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 parental influence.The impacts of these are low productivity at
work
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 and
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lack
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a lack
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 of sense of fulfilment in
life
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.These consequences may affect other aspects of
people
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's lives negatively.
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parents
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 should allow their
children
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 to study what they want and the government should provide education that will be easily accessible and available to everyone

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dread
  • passion
  • inherent talent
  • fufilling
  • career
  • job
  • fulfilled
  • unhappy
  • unsatisfied
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • stress
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • self-esteem
  • emotional well-being
  • potential
  • achieve
  • success
  • personal growth
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