Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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of technology, human has already been experiencing a lot of convenience.

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phenomenon, many

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been exposed to an environment that

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cannot help using

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. Because of the situation, it is essential for us to

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why

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thing happened and a positive side and negative

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exist.

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essay will explore possible reasons and personal

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on the issue. First of all, we have to notice

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why kids use

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every single day. In my opinion, it is evident that they have

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plenty of loneliness. Nowadays, a double-income family has significantly increased and

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it is required for

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to look for their own pleasant.

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decreased and

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circumstance takes their friends and playgrounds.

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that

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opt for inevitably

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electronic gadgets to reduce loneliness. Another reason is that a lot of people are

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advantage of

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Korean

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rate of

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for Korean is over 90% even including 1-11 ages.

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is because Korea has developed quickly information technology.

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, it is possible that

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have to play with

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not to feel a sense of

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out.

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phenomenon is undesirable since they could lose some unforgettable memories with their friends. In the past, plenty of individuals used to spend time with their friends and

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go outside and do play

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hide-and-seek. Even now, those experiences make me laugh with happiness and joy and

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energy to do better all of

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I have to do.

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, if

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keep using

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, they cannot obtain those kinds of memories. In my perspective, they could not relish a huge amount of outside

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in the future.

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, it is harmful to maintain

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when many kids focus on their own screens.

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, the case of Korean students, they are familiar with sedentary

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owing to academic elitism.

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to

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problem, using

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can cause a variety of health problems

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as ocular pain, back pain, and digestive trouble.

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, it could result in difficulties with concentration because a lot of

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probably glimpse into their massage or social network services on their own phones even during studying.

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, watching

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screens all the time leads to

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serious health

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. In conclusion, many young ages tend to use

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almost every day

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they feel

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and do not want to have

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sense of

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out.

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, there are two aspects regarding

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issue; a positive and a negative.

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, I believe that it is possible to bring more negative impacts like losing

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memory and causing health problems.

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, parents have to notice their

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. If they are obsessed with using

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a smartphone

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, it is crucial to take apart from their addictive

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