The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main Features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the steps involved in producing heat by using

geothermal

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a geothermal

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Power plant. There are five steps in the process, from making water cool to causing electricity.

The first step is

that chilly water which is

fulled

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filled

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in a tank

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apply

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pumped

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is pumped

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Down nearly 5

kilometers

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kilometres

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into the earth towards an injection wall .

Secondly

, the water is

hitted

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hit

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by boiling stones in the geothermal zone.

Following

this

, in the production well;

scotching

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scorching

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drink is again pumped up into a condenser at the surface where It converts into steam. The

last

step is that

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apply

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the turbine is rotated by steam and

giving

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gives

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rise to

electrify

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electricity

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which is produced by the generator.

This

environmentaly

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environmentally

friendly energy is supplied to be used later.

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geothermal energy
renewable source
sustainable
drilling wells
hot water and steam
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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main Features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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