You have asked for a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you would like to discuss in the meeting.

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Dear Mr Josiv, I am writing

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letter to ask you about organising a meeting with you tomorrow. I would like to discuss regarding to make some modifications to my working schedule. As you know, since I was a single woman, working flexible hours has never been a big deal for me. But, since I get married I indulged in other household chores too. I have to take of my husband's loveable dog when he is not there,

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prepare his meal and do other chores like house cleaning, laundry and so on.

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, it is very hard for me to manage the whole stuff with an uncertain working time.

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is the reason, I would like to talk about in the meeting, to fit me with a fixed schedule in your company. Unfortunately,

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would be unfair to other employees but I hope they would understand too. Well, It would be great if you write your convenient location and time for

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conference. I will be happy to be there as soon as you decide. I hope you understand my situation and will consider my request as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully Heena Chadda

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

197 words

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