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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
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Some scientists and technologists expect that all
vehicles
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 including
cars
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,buses,
trucks
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and trucks
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 will be autonomous in the near future.
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 there should be some issues
about
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 driverless
vehicles
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,I think autonomous
cars
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 can be useful for
people
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. First of all, the advantages of
autonomous
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the autonomous
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 car are obvious because it saves
driver’s
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drivers
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troubles
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trouble
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.
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 of
human
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humans
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, autonomous
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system
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systems
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 can control
vehicles
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 based on
command
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the command
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 of passengers.
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,
people
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 can simply order to
vehicle
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the vehicle
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 for driving to
destination
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their destination
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 wherever they want to go. Passengers don’t have to pay attention to all the traffics and other
vehicles
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 because the
system
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 will check the whole
things
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while
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 it is driving the
vehicles
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.
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,many
people
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concerns
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are concerns
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 about its safety as a disadvantage of autonomous
car
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cars
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.They are worried about
autonomous
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the autonomous
an autonomous
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system
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 can really handle the urgent situation which happens every day
in
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 the road. In fact, it makes sense that A.
I technology
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 is still not perfect for handling all the emergencies now but it will be improved in the near future through various experiments.
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, I think if all the
people
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uses
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 autonomous
vehicles
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, it will be safer when all the
vehicles
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 are controlled by the A.I
which
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only
focuses
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focus
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 on driving through command
unlike
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,unlike
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 humans.
To conclude
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,
although
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 autonomous
cars
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 have safety issues,I think driverless
cars
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 will become popular and effective in the future through
its
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their
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 highly-developed driving
system
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.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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