In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some scientists and technologists expect that all

vehicles

including

cars

,buses,

trucks

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and trucks

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will be autonomous in the near future.

Although

there should be some issues

about

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driverless

vehicles

,I think autonomous

cars

can be useful for

people

. First of all, the advantages of

autonomous

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the autonomous

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car are obvious because it saves

driver’s

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drivers

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troubles

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trouble

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.

Instead

of

human

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humans

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, autonomous

system

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systems

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can control

vehicles

based on

command

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the command

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of passengers.

For example

,

people

can simply order to

vehicle

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the vehicle

a vehicle

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for driving to

destination

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their destination

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wherever they want to go. Passengers don’t have to pay attention to all the traffics and other

vehicles

because the

system

will check the whole

things

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while

it is driving the

vehicles

.

However

,many

people

concerns

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are concerns

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about its safety as a disadvantage of autonomous

car

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cars

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.They are worried about

autonomous

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the autonomous

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system

can really handle the urgent situation which happens every day

in

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on

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the road. In fact, it makes sense that A.

I technology

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Technology

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is still not perfect for handling all the emergencies now but it will be improved in the near future through various experiments.

Furthermore

, I think if all the

people

uses

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autonomous

vehicles

, it will be safer when all the

vehicles

are controlled by the A.I

which

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apply

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only

focuses

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focus

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on driving through command

unlike

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humans.

To conclude

,

although

autonomous

cars

have safety issues,I think driverless

cars

will become popular and effective in the future through

its

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their

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highly-developed driving

system

.